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ImageSharon
Dec 29, 2011 12:46 AM CST
Name: Sharon
Kentucky
Here's the story 'Backstage': http://cubits.org/writing101/thread/view/65506/

This is the chat thread for that story. You can post your comments here, but please don't post to the story thread.

We hope you enjoy our story, we'll work quickly as we can to keep it short and fast for you.

Have fun!
ImageLaVonne
Dec 29, 2011 1:13 AM CST
Name: Dorothy (LaVonne) Mitchell
Somerset, KY

I see that the energy level starts from the beginning. A mystery is introduced and tragedy. This is going to be an "edge of your seat story!"
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ImageZanymuse
Dec 29, 2011 1:33 AM CST
Name: Brenda Essig
Rio Dell, CA
Suspense, murder, interpersonal relationships, drama...all introduced in the first intriguing introduction. . .
You definitely have my attention Thumbs up
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ImageLaVonne
Dec 29, 2011 2:23 AM CST
Name: Dorothy (LaVonne) Mitchell
Somerset, KY

for sure!!
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ImageSharon
Dec 29, 2011 2:24 AM CST
Name: Sharon
Kentucky
Right on target, Melissa. Perfect.
I love it when this happens. It's 2:30 here, I think I better try for tomorrow morning, there's no telling what I might write at this hour.

Y'all sleep tight.
ImageLaVonne
Dec 29, 2011 2:58 AM CST
Name: Dorothy (LaVonne) Mitchell
Somerset, KY

You have to sleep?! Oh No! Well if you must...catcha in the morning.
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ImageZanymuse
Dec 29, 2011 3:13 AM CST
Name: Brenda Essig
Rio Dell, CA
Thumbs up Two great episodes before I even made it to bed.
Sorry I commented on the wrong thread. *Blush*
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ImageSharon
Dec 29, 2011 3:21 AM CST
Name: Sharon
Kentucky
You are deleted Zany!!

The story is writing itself in my head, I can't even get to sleep. But my fingers are too tired to type anymore, so I'm really truly out of here now.

A little chamomile tea should help!
ImageLaVonne
Dec 29, 2011 4:06 AM CST
Name: Dorothy (LaVonne) Mitchell
Somerset, KY

great first 2 parts of the story, Melissa and Sharon. Good night, pleasant dreams.
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Imagecececoogan
Dec 29, 2011 6:55 AM CST
Name: Cherie (Cece) Coogan
Southeastern WI zone 5a
Glad I found this, this morning. I was so excited and I see the you, Sharon and Melissa didn't let me down. I love it already. And I know its not only going to get better and better it will end up being another story that I will want to have no ending to just like all the rest.

Hurray! Hurray! Hurray! Hurray! Hurray! Hurray! Hurray! Hurray! Hurray! Hurray! Hurray! Hurray! Hurray! Hurray! Hurray! Hurray! Hurray!
the faster I go, the behinder I get
ImageLaVonne
Dec 29, 2011 7:06 AM CST
Name: Dorothy (LaVonne) Mitchell
Somerset, KY

good morning Cherie. Indeed those girls have drawn us in again....can't hardly wait for the next installment. Have a great day!
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Tahlmorra lujhala mei wiccan
(The fate of a man rests always within the hands of the gods)
ImageSashagirl
Dec 29, 2011 6:49 PM CST
Name: Deanna
Eastern Iowa
A good example is the best sermon.
Wow!

Sharon and Melissa,
You two have "hit the ground, running" for sure. You both surely have my attention, and I'm looking forward to any and all future additions to your story.

I can already tell it's going to be exciting. Thumbs up Group hug
ImageSharon
Dec 29, 2011 6:57 PM CST
Name: Sharon
Kentucky
Little bit later tonight, Deanna, I got sidetracked at ATP today.
So check back in then if you have time. I should have something up pretty soon. It's in my mind, just have to get it on screen Big Grin
ImageSashagirl
Dec 29, 2011 7:42 PM CST
Name: Deanna
Eastern Iowa
A good example is the best sermon.
Hurray! Hurray! Hurray!
Desertdenial
Dec 29, 2011 9:09 PM CST
Name: Marie Ortiz
Tolleson, Arizona
Love it!
Marie
I have this theory that chocolate slows down the aging process.... It may not be true, but do I dare take the chance?
Imagecececoogan
Dec 29, 2011 9:27 PM CST
Name: Cherie (Cece) Coogan
Southeastern WI zone 5a
Oh Sharon your are the BEST!!!!!!!!!
the faster I go, the behinder I get
ImageSharon
Dec 29, 2011 11:15 PM CST
Name: Sharon
Kentucky
Done.
ImageZanymuse
Dec 29, 2011 11:45 PM CST
Name: Brenda Essig
Rio Dell, CA
Thumbs up again Thumbs up
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Imagecececoogan
Dec 30, 2011 8:12 AM CST
Name: Cherie (Cece) Coogan
Southeastern WI zone 5a
hmmmmmmmmmm if I learned anything from the stories ya'll; have written it is not to jump to who dunnit toq quickly.

Setting the stage is what you do Sharon and I love it. Good job my friend.
Thumbs up Thumbs up
the faster I go, the behinder I get
ImageLaVonne
Dec 31, 2011 8:47 PM CST
Name: Dorothy (LaVonne) Mitchell
Somerset, KY

Melissa what you do with characters is just amazing. Its like you are standing in the shadows watching them interact. Its just wonderful.
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