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Oct 18, 2011 10:24 PM CST
Name: Sharon
Kentucky
Sure, I hate all that redundancy. And it does work.
Doesn't work as well with several people, but in most cases it can be minimized.

But watch your quotes; it should read:

"Ah! That makes sense," she thought, "I like the idea of not having to repeat the he said, she said so often. You rock!"

It's the quotes within a broken sentence that matter, too.

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