Viewing post #776918 by Sharon
|Sure, I hate all that redundancy. And it does work.
Doesn't work as well with several people, but in most cases it can be minimized.
But watch your quotes; it should read:
"Ah! That makes sense," she thought, "I like the idea of not having to repeat the he said, she said so often. You rock!"
It's the quotes within a broken sentence that matter, too.